Incense

Swirling smoke

Inside a sunbeam.

Eddies of air

Settle, then shift,

A slow sway.

Twirling, curling,

Bending, now backwards,

Dancing to the rhythm

Of breath.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of description. Make the movement of the smoke come alive to the reader. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Coyote

[Skylah Ginette]

thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Abigail Bergeron]

This is awesome. Really cool imagery. Very nice.

[Skylah Ginette]

Thank you :)

[A hare off]

Soft and soothing is how this reads to me today. Such a sweet and hypnotic fragrance floats from your words Skylah.

[Skylah Ginette]

Thank you :)