Feelings Are Where The Mind Is

I don't normally write poems, but the feelings I had for a girl made me do it.

Smiled like all of you,
Happiness visiting me.
Thinking we can be two
But my heart is empty.

A bird singing its song
Hearing it all day long.
Breaking my heart again
So I am still in pain.

I wake up in the middle of the night
My skin burning as if from a fight
Tears rolling along my skin
Knowing all of my sin !

Night and day I feel the same
Forever living in shame.
My loneliness is killing me
Take me out of that misery.

I love you like I've never before
Wanting to give you everything more
But you are never looking my way
Treating my as any other day.

My loneliness is eternity
Just like a rolling stone
Only I will remain alone
Always filled with pure envy
The sun is high in the sky
What a beautiful day to die !

Reviews

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emotional write, well done