The secret crush

This is about a girl who is afraid to tell her crush that she loves him

She'd known him her entire life
She always dreamed to be his wife
Just his smile made her heart melt
But she never told him how she felt

Forever hoped to have him here
Always dreamed to hold him near
Time passed and they both did grow
But still she never let him know

Perfect chances passed her by
But she just couldn't tell this guy
No matter what she'd ever do...
He still didn't have a clue

But one day her whole world did end
When she heard news from a friend
About the wreck he'd gotten in...
She'd never see his smile again

Now at his grave she softly cries
The tears running from sad eyes
This hurting girl whose heart is broken
All because of love unspoken

Author's Note

Enjoy!

Reviews

[Aisha Wahab]

Very nicely rhymed and written.

[Kaelyn Shea]

this reminds me of a friend i knew before they died in a car wreck. i really liked this it showed alot of emotion. Great job keep on writing :)

Kaelyn

[zappy]

i agree with ever one else on this this is a powerfull write

[Nathan Durham]

I really enjoyed reading this. It had really powerful emotion and it flowed well. The rhyming adds a very nice touch, as well. You did well on this piece.

[Pen The Willows]

OMG! I love it! Sad, but good. Most of it reminds me of my friend and the guy she likes (except the death part). I have to tell her to read this immeadiatley. Good job!