Please don't leave me!!!

Please don't leave me!!!

A Poem by Dr.Who.LOVER
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You promised you'd never leave me. So why am I rotting away in

this darkness where you left me? Why did you leave me? You

said you loved me, but what am I to you now? You were

everything to me. You were the one who shone the light in my

darkest days. When you told me Goodbye I begged for you not

to leave. But you still left, not caring about my sorrow. When

you walked away from me you took a part of me with you. Now

I am empty.
                               You promised....
                   So why am I sitting here writing this?

© 2010 Dr.Who.LOVER


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Dr.Who.LOVER
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Its amazing

Posted 14 Years Ago


So... sad. Yet, so true. Nice write, truly.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This poem is very sad, mostly because it makes the reader feel your pain. I am sorry that this had to happen for you, but I have to say, that it became a pretty good poem :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


this happened to me yesterday

Posted 15 Years Ago


I completly understand this. This literally happened to me 2 weeks ago!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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