There is dreams....and then theres reality

Personal

I am happy with you. We are always going to be together. I love

you and you love me. We

will always be one. I will always stay by your side and you will

stay by mine. You wipe away

my tears and I wipe away your sorrow. The pain you feel won't

exist when your around  me.

You are my everything, my whole world. I love you. And we will

always be together. You and

I will never be apart

That was my dream.....But this is the reality
You left me. To rot in my own loneliness. You are gone and I feel nothing now. Nothing but sorrow and the pain that I feel anytime I see you with her. She's the only one you see now. I beg you please come back to me.

Author's Note

This isn't about a boyfriend I lost.....I lost something much more than that

Reviews

[Leave me alone....]

awwwww this one made me want to cry!!!!! awesome poem none the less.

[Japanese Cherry]

this is so moving... it makes u realize how a dream can be shattered by reality...

[L. Catherine]

I'm very sorry for your loss. This is a very deep and moving piece. It makes you realise how dreams and reality are truly different. Good job :)

[Katseye]

I'm sorry for your loss, but love the way you wrote this peace. At first I was thrown by the strike through, but after I read it all, it made wonderful sense. Powerful peace.

[Matthew Kult]

Hello VampireChick,

May I suggest an Ice pick to her throat? Works for me usually.

Great write. Brave to show these feelings to everyone.

Regards,

Matthew