I hate you

I Love You....

Such small words and yet I cherished

everytime your lips spoke them

Anytime you spoke these words I

began to feel a light shine through

the darkness which is my heart.

Everytime you spoke these words

I knew you meant them. They

were like a promise which could

never be broken. A bond which

could never be severed.

 

I Hate You...

Such small words and yet

everytime you spit them one

more part of me dies inside.

 

As I hold this knife to my broken heart

all I wan is to hear is those three words

you once said to me.

 

I Love You...

Even though I know you despie me so

I could never find it in my empty heart

to hate you.

 

        But even in death

        I'm still not free...

Author's Note

I need a title :)

Reviews

[Katannaism]

This piece is definitely can be related. Definitely very deep and chock full of emotion. The way it's all put together really spoke volumes. Great work!

[Leave me alone....]

this is really really good! and really really deep.

[Sarah>_>]

I can relate so well =_=

[GlamGirl]

Wow. This is a very deep piece on what makes our world go round. Great work!

[Marianne]

Wow, this is deep. Good job, very well written.

[Madison A. Wright]

very strong words.. Hate & Love.. not to be thrown around lightly and or abused. I could feel the love and passion and then the ache and heartbreak.. from happiness to hate...

its like a love hate relationship....

just one minor correction.. the line 'all I wan is to hear is those three words' is it suppose to be 'want'?