The End

Lost my soul

in this hell hole

of a world.

Curled

into a ball.

Reeling from the fall.

Enternal damnation.

Wishing for salvation

from this life

that's such a strife

to maintain.

Going insane.

Don't know what to do.

If only everyone knew

the thoughts I had.

Rarely good; mostly bad.

I've stopped praying

because I was always waiting

for something

but got nothing.

I'm tired of trying.

Inside I'm dying.

Give me the rope.

Tie it around my throat.

This is it.

I quit.

Author's Note

Eh, yeah not my best work. Just felt like writing something. So here's that something. Oh, and if anyone has a name for the poem, feel free to tell me cuz ive got nothing lol. Thanks :D

Reviews

[Larrycall]

i really understand what ur saying i felt this way before and i'm just getting out the dark now so there is hope for u 2

[Coffee Vampier]

so great poem, i do love it even if it is slightly depressing. I guess the reason i like is becasue I have felt that way before/ never give up hope, its all we have :)

[Jenn]

Painfull, seems like something is missing, or maybe that is what makes it such a good poem

[HorrorMaster]

really sad

[tigerclaw]

I have had that rope many of times only to have the next day strip it from my hands. The next day will bring the sunlight. I promise.

[DearSweetAgony]

Wow I love this beautiful poem!
"The End" a love the name but not as much as I love the end!
Give me the rope. Tie it around my throat.This is it.I quit.
I love it!
Great Job!

[michael]

I think this depicts the ultimate depression, and I believe it is a very, very good
piece of work.

[Sasha]

a very powerful poem. don't worry, I found this work to be excellent!
It takes a few seconds to get in to the flow of the poem, but once you're in, the only way you can stop is when the poem ends.
Great job! :)