Insomnia

"A trubute to fellow insomniacs"

no night gives me sleep
miscarried dreams in the deep
nebulously numb

Reviews

[Woody]

short but says it all. of course the second line is a beaut.
very nice. and relatable.

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thanks Woody :)

[Woody]

pleasure. care to take a look at MY insomnia? same title. not as good as yours, though.

[Wendy G.]

"Miscarried dreams in the deep"

What a hauntingly fantastic line!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Thank you very much....it was haunting indeed....:)

[~]

https://youtu.be/psuRGfAaju4 :):)

wishing you deep sleep :)

[SleeplessVolcano]

So do I......I will put your wish in the microwave with my hot chocolate and baked it until well done and then I will sprinkle it over two pink marshmallows on top.......thanks honey....:)

[SleeplessVolcano]

and bake it...geez....my language has left me for another one....:P

[~]

yummm sounds wishilicious :) do share please - honey :) :)

[nazia]

well well well.. what a tribute to insomniacs... There is no way you can come out of that cycle of miscarried dreams. (your pen name says so lol ;))
Great write ")

[SleeplessVolcano]

My strategy? Find new dreams.....:)....all pen names are overrated, even our real names too! :P
read moreMy strategy? Find new dreams.....:)....all pen names are overrated, even our real names too! :P

Thanks for commenting!

[nazia]

Ha :D. Might be but I love my name :) it has an awesome meaning..

[SleeplessVolcano]

Enlighten me :)

[nazia]

Well Nazia means "someone people are proud of".

[SleeplessVolcano]

Ahhhh.....now that a poem about what that means to you....:)

[SleeplessVolcano]

Oops.....write, I mean.....:)

[Pax]

Then in the morning your sleep longer, isn't it?? I have this predicament before.... When the time i was jobless for several months of hunting, I've been living at night - browsing the net or watch re-runs of the tv series i love or read or anything that i can take my time off and mind of the things reality were... its like your mind is on over drive, finding ways to sleep then you completely numb of all feeling.... anyways, i really do can relate to this piece, my friend, thank you for sharing!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Wow, my friend.....one in a million chance, but I am right there now....:).....but going for an interview on Sunday so hopefully everything can return to a new normal soon.....thanks for your comments :)

[brezybaby3]

short to the point. i like the "miscarried dreams in the deep" line. I can totally relate.