All the Gifts

I was thinking a out something completely unrelated and then this came.

All The Gifts

Quick!

Cast a gaze

above the 

serene ocean 

spray

Quick!

Run your fingers

Across the red rock

canyon

Quick!

Dash through

the

quite summer meadow.

Gifts

for all

Gifts for 

everyone

What do you think?

would happen

without them?

Life would lose color

Life would assimilate

THese are the  gifts

that make us unique

that make us remember

that make us

never forget

Reviews

[MissWordSmith]

a very good write. i liked your last lines. they are so true. the feeling of nature, the emotions it brings out in us ..nothing can do the same.
it is sad, that many people don't appreciate the small things like the ocean's spray or the greenery all around them. you are right when you try to say that people will only appreciate things when they are taken away from them.

this was a nice piece! caught my attention! it had an urgent feel to it that was needed for the topic you wrote on. keep it up!