Cards

We each have turns.

We drop.

We play.

We hold

We are dealt a hand of cards.

Each and everyone.

We all have the same amount.

We are just dealt different ones.

But I

hold a different belief.

We are all given the same hand.

We just play them differently.

Reviews

[The Queen of Pentacles]

Nice mix,Its good!but every one said it all :) Analogy buy cards! seems a line Van Diesel would say... death by cards? maybe a little his style! :) Should have use this poem in Conicals of Riddick! awesome!

[closed]

I really really liked the ending! I enjoyed the analogy of life and a deck of cards :)

[sumit]

last line is the biggest truth...

[J.Black]

Oh wow, this is really really good! Talk about you holding the cards to truth!

[Roxie Demonia]

wow thats so nice.

[m]

Awesome! So true!

[aftervision]

that can be so true -- at times i wonder the same thing -- nice drop my poet