Dine-In Menu

for escuela #2

As the hotel air-conditioner

Growled,

The old man

                        Mumbled and

                        Flipped through

                        The

            Dine-in menu,

            Which was

            Crinkled and

                                    Stained

                                    The color of

                                    Potato bags

                                    And

                                    Cheap-hotel

                                    Vacations;

He decided to go out for dinner.

 

Reviews

[Edward Clay]

another one sentence poem!

this pretty much sums up the state of a poorly ran establishment!

a lot of your poems ive realised could be senryus if they were shorter, as they create that same type of feel.