Frustration

about taking your frustration out on other people i suppose?

Do you ever wonder

Where it all goes

When you scream

Out to the moon?

 

Did you never know

That I caught it

And screamed it

Back down to you?

 

For,

To you,

I am

As close

As real

As loved

As the moon.

Reviews

[Cassandra]

Why is it that the people that tick us off often are the ones we love the most? I like this short poem. Two roles are developed. A person venting their anger and a person in their life who is distant and unknowing of their plight or that their anger is aimed in their direction. I like it. "I am as close ..as the moon"..painfully simple. I like this very much.

[Dressed in Poetry]

I love the second stanza. It's pretty much amazing.