Moon

good night! =)

The moon followed her

On this wintry night,

Keeping her in close range,

Always in protective sight.

 

The moon followed her,

Sending its faint light

Dashing along the sidewalk

To guide her in the night.

 

The moon followed her home,

And she invited it in.

It declined, however,

Saying it had other hearts to win.

 

So she gave it a wink

And wished it well.

The moon blew her a kiss

And promised dreams to tell.

Author's Note

another stanza?

Reviews

[Dressed in Poetry]

Haha. This sounds like a child's poem. I like where it ends, actually.

[Daiyu]

This is beautiful. And no, I don't think you need another stanza. IMO, if you added one it might destroy the delicate beauty of what you've managed to create here. But if you really wanted one you could add it and I'd read it again. Maybe I'd change my mind.