Insanity

ehhh just messing around. needs more?

The neighborhood you left behind

 

The neighborhood had once been kind

 

The neighborhood that was your mind.

 

You left in a tattered cape

 

You left in shattered shape

 

And you wrote it out in blinding yellow tape.

Reviews

[J. James Reider]

Needs more... I don't know... I suppose if you were trying to tell a story then maybe two or three more stanzas would be good... If your shrouding it in mystery then I would leave it the way it is. Sometimes leaving people wanting more is good to get them to read more of your work. I write pretty short poems myself so I kinda get the whole thing.... I think it is fine either way... Personally I would let it the way it is... lol... It stands on its own, that's my opinion.