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Concrete Rainforest

Offered no shelter from the storm

Posted a sign up:

                Be warned

                Stay clear—

                Come in, for Heaven’s sake, come in,

 

But

 

Concrete Rainforest

Offered no shelter from the storm

 

Reviews

[Dressed in Poetry]

On a physical level, this makes me think of storms like Katrina tearing down everything no matter what. On an emotional level, it makes me think that no matter how many walls are built, we cannot keep emotion out - for good or for ill. Either way, it amazes me that I think so much about so short a poem. Wonderful.