Fade out

(Curtain Rises) 

everyone awaits 

stories being shared 

trust is built 

friendships made

two strangers now 

best friends, no lies

        Right? 

Drama unfolds 

lies are being spilled

everything is upside down

chaos breaks 

friendships broken

hearts hurts, trust broken

(lights fade out) 

one girl left to 

make sense of it all 

she fades

with her innocence
(Curtain Falls) 

Reviews

[Troy Henson]

Nice work Sarah. A fast moving piece that flowed seamlessly.

Well done.
Regards
Troy

[Sarmelendez]

thank you for the review:)

[creativequill]

Love the short lines for dramatic effect here, moves at a fast pace to see what's going on, good read.

[Sarmelendez]

thank you

[creativequill]

you're very welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

A nice poem. I like the ending the most...:)

[Sarmelendez]

thank you

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Emily B]

masterful use of the dramatic metaphor

top shelf work here

[Sarmelendez]

thank you.

[Emily B]

looking forward to reading more of you

[Sarmelendez]

Thank you