Smile and Your Heart Smiles with You

Many Times I thought about it

Smile and your heart smiles with you

Learning this at a young age

When I was just a lad

Just before my teens

When I just through girls were keen

Simple things like a happy heart

Makes Love go Around

Made all my young ladies smile

I turned their frowns upside down

When I would tell my simple jokes

That made me the life of the party

They all wanted to hear my rare stories

fancy and they were from heart to soul

The ladies thought I was really something

telling stories that made them laugh

Took away their gray skies

And made it for a sunny day

All the ladies gathered around

to hear my jokes and happy days

Reviews

[Broken.buddy]

Good message in the poem. I would just add this small, minor correction : 'They all wanted to hear my rear stories' . The word 'rear' should be 'Rare'. otherwise, the soft and good spirit in this poem completely take a different turn from here. Keep it up. Keep spreading good messages