A Day In The Park

A day in the Park
Take One

A day in the park with my two

Special someones on the swings and slides

Just sitting back watching them take in a ride

Gives me a heart felt high

One grand child in one hand

One grand child in the other

Out for a walk in the park

With their mother

What makes them happy

Is to see their smile

At a bowl of Ice Cream

Or a sugary snow cone

They haven't seen in a while

Anyway you look at it

My mind is blown

I'm happy knowing

My daughter and my Grand children

belong to me I love them with all my heart

Part of my family tree

Reviews

[Rose Diamond]

Very lovely and uplifting, and it's very clear to the reader that it's a very heartfelt poem. Great job! :)

[SmittyJas]

Thanks Rosie for this wonderful review on my works of poetry here the love for my grandchildren show so much when I write about them all the time and I think there Mother is kind of special too.

[Beccy]

Lovely sentiments and clearly written from the heart. Long may you enjoy those two special someones.

Beccy.

[SmittyJas]

Thanks Beccy for you sweet comment on my short poem about the two wonderful grandchildren and there beautiful Mother (My Daughter) They mean the world to me and this is why I can express with high praise in such great poetry my love for them. I'm glad you took the time to stop by and comment. blessings to you.

[SmittyJas]

You captured the beauty of "all that's around you" poet! I enjoyed this day in the park, through your words, and all the simple lovely things of life, keep penning! and keep that tree alive ;)

- Elisa

[SmittyJas]

Thanks Elisa for you wonderful words of encouragement written on my behalf this is a poem of love and affection for the kids and there Mother whom I love to spend time with. And may every tree grow healthy and long all the days of our lives.