Friday Morning Blues

Song for Friday and the beginning to your weekend.

I got the Friday Morning Blues

Knowing I'm not spending the weekend with you

You're going away with another guy you say

I be thinking every minute of what you will be doing

With a guy that is not me

I got the Friday Morning Blues

I tried you cell phone 

Your number was changed

I took it to heart and said I was to blame

My heart torn Its tattered and left in shame

Its going to be a dreaded weekend without you

I got the Friday Morning Blues

It going to be a turn down weekend

WIth out my Girl around

I will be waring a frown

Now that I know my Girl not my Girl any more

Makes my mind kind of soar

I got the Friday Morning Blues

Thinking of who your spending the weekend

and what you're going to be doing

With this new interest in town

I feel lonely I got a frown

You got that new guy in town

And I got the Friday Morning Blues

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Very sad expression of loss. Losing a love one or being cheating on is a heart breaking experience indeed. I felt your emotions were very well expressed and the poem flowed with almost perfection. I could picture each feeling inside your heart and I felt your pain as the words ran down the page. Here is some constructive advice:
I got the Friday Morning Blues( , )
Knowing I'm not spending the weekend with you( . )
You're going away with another guy you say.
I( 'll ) be thinking every minute of what you will be doing( ,)
With a guy that is not me( . )
I( 've ) got the Friday Morning Blues( . )

I tried you( r ) cell phone( . )
Your number was changed( . )
I took it to heart and said I was to blame( . )
My heart torn( . ) It( ' )s tattered and left in shame( . )
It( ' )s going to be a dreaded weekend without you( . )
I( 've ) got the Friday Morning Blues( . )

It( 's ) going to be a turn down weekend( , )
With out my Girl around( . )
I will be (wearing) a frown( , )
Now that I know my Girl ( is ) not my Girl any more( , )
Makes my mind kind of soar( . )
I( 've ) got the Friday Morning Blues( . )

Thinking of who your spending the weekend ( with )
and what you're going to be doing
With this new interest in town( , )
I feel lonely( ,) I( 've) got a frown( . )
You( 've ) got that new guy in town( , )
And I( 've ) got the Friday Morning Blues( . )

Of coarse, these are just suggestions! I am a firm believer in the concept that poetry has no laws. Thank you for sharing and please return the favor by reviewing one of my pieces.

[Benedict Mdluli]

Well what a sad piece to say the feeling is beyond measure I love this piece.