Fall Colors-Color Poetry Contest-Poetry 101

Autumn Autumn

Lots of colors to be found

Yellow Red Orange and Brown

Somehow I'm waring a frown

Autumn colors all around

Leaves are falling on the ground

We roll through the leaves fooling around

We can't keep our feet on the ground

It seems like all fun and games

But dam winter is on It's Way

Soon the birds will wing away

It will be to dark

 

For the children to go out and play

Winter here going to stay

What else more can I say

Seasons change like the wind

So please when it gets cold Let me in

Reviews

[Sushravya (Vidhisha)]

The rhyming was playful.
Simple and neatly written.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

oh I loved this I love Autumn and
you brought this piece to life.



I had to look nicely penned
and I love the Rhyme in this piece.


Blessings. Benita

[SmittyJas]

Thanks for your Blessings and for your neat comments on my Autumn poem.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

you're welcome.

[Sindu]

This is as fun as playing in the leaves. Despite your frown I can't help but smile that it got such a lovely tune. Nice penning.

[SmittyJas]

Thanks for your kind words on my autumn poem for the season its a great comment very impressive and makes me feel great about where I stand in poetry land.

[Sindu]

You are very welcome :)

[Fran Marie]

Love the flow and rhyme in this...indeed cold winter days are coming...

[SmittyJas]

Wonderful of you to comment about one of my perfect rhymes it doesn't come easy. It's a labor of love.