Love and the revolving door

Love and the revolving door

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Falling so fast and recovering so slow

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They said we were to young
To fall in love
But we adventured in
Time and time again

adventured in love again and again
It was like old habit for us
Kisses sweet
A little sweet talk some romance

And the Two for lover's lane
Things just weren't the same
Arguments got heated sometimes
then cooler heads prevailed

For we were on loves trails
not running but on a slow trot
around a lovely track
We ventured into loves gardens

Where many roses bloomed
Multi colors of roses
But I set my eyes on you
You were the prettiest rose of the bunch

My mind had a hunch
I chosen you out of all the roses in the bushes
Comparing roses and wines
Your rose was the best bottle of wine

Vineyards ever created
and out of the bunch of roses
Your roses aroma
Was the sweetest on the stems

There was no one else to compare with them
falling so fast and recovering so slow
Love and the revolving door we go through
Life and love can be pain

But life without Roses
Just could not be the same
I just want to hold you till 
You sense that I love you forever

© 2014 SmittyJas


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I read this before and really enjoyed it. I don't know why I didn't comments then Smitty. Thank you.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I've read this before and I really enjoyed it. Thanks Smitty.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Smitty, you write such sweet love poems.
So sweet, I love it. Honest and true feelings.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sweet and real, such a conviction of love, such convictions feel so right and true. .(This is stuff that dreams are made of possibly too.) I'm glad on this earth we have roses too. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..