no Valentine for Valentine's Day

no Valentine for Valentine's Day

A Poem by SmittyJas
"

I got twelve Woman on my mind

"
Today as always I am falling out of love
No Valentine for me this Valentine's day
Is always the way it was meant to be
But I have twelve women on my mind

Playing around with fantasy
and doing time
I got those twelve ladies on my mind
Twenty miles down the road

driving my ram truck
With great road traction
But I still have no single valentine 
on my mind my mind cluttered

and my camera's shutters
are shutting the woman out
I can't pick between the twelve women on my mind
They are all beautiful

They all have their charms
All have their perfumes
That drive me to the moon
As I sit behind my chevy truck

and Dream of the twelve woman
nightly and have daymares
When they all come 
a calling at once

 

© 2015 SmittyJas


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LOL...this is so cute...now really...what in the world would you do with 12??????
Love the daymares!

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


well all I can say smitty is you are craving punishment,cause I know 3 or 4 of those women will get even

I have some relatives in pittsburg

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hum, and all of this time I thought a Ram truck was a Dodge, not a Chevy! I like the thought of all 12 coming to see you at once. Dream on, I see their cars pulling in your driveway. Valentine

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is a really nice poem you have all these options but no true valentine a sad but comforting message "calling at once" that our thoughts can console us, nice poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..