end of February such delight

Dear Susie

It's been a months of tuesdays

Since I have seen you so joyful

You are my toy my gal for real

End of February such delight

I have you in plain sight

This is a letter to the love of my life

Susie baby you been good for me

You gave you heart unselfishly

I give you all my love

In my heart and soul baby

Knowing you are my Joy in life tonight

We never had bad times that I can remember

we always fixed them up by December

never carried a fight over till the next year

Dropped all our fears in tears and left them in a basket last year

Dear Susie

We been good together

Just like bread and butter

hearts melted and intertwined

your heart only with mine

Reviews

[MsJewel]

So sweet and romantic. ... hearts melted and intertwined - I love it!
Check the third line in the first verse and you may want to change I to I've or I have.
a gorgeous poem Jim
:) Julie

[wordman]

smitty my friend,you can belt out that romance
bet ol suzie loves you

[Confuser]

Smitty it is absolutely beautiful and I hope she reads it. This is so heartfelt and I love JIM. Oh my I just saw that! duuh: well at least I'm laughing after reading this poem full of emotions but sad too. It gets better every day. I think God has a plan. Anyway...Thank you. Dale

[Valentine]

When love is shared and returned it is special. Valentine

[Jamestown]

Sweet a really smoooooth! Nice piece of flowing work! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!