Summer Day in the meadows

Love in the grass

The meadows is where you will find
Me and my lover on a hot summer's day
dancing across at the field of grass
Thinking of summer days gone past

Taking blankets to rest our heads
Like we had no troubles no fears
A picnic basket for us to share
A vine full of grapes a bottle of wine

Me and my girl sharing time
A day in the sun on some summer's day
We together in all but fun play
We could do this every day

She gave me a sweet kiss
and a sweet hug
One that gave to me a love bug
We wil be happy throughout our whole lives
When we say our vows and become Husband and Wife

Reviews

[Valentine]

Really like the picture and the write. I hope she appreciates all of the love you have for her. Valentine

[Saraswati]

I cn relate ths awessom poetry wth my lyf..the days bfre wedding..wth my man..

[Briana O'Connor]

Very sweet love tale you have woven. One suggestion would be to research synonyms for the word day. It is used a few times and the repetition distracts from the cute aura of the piece. Thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

jim ,a sweet write,about you and your girl,loved the meadow scene

[Confuser]

Smitty: it's just lovely; great wording flow, theme. Great writing; always uplifting.

[Jamestown]

Another great piece! Very calming and peaceful write with lots of romance abd love
attached,thanks for sharing and b-blessed.