Where the Poetry is Hot

Some think it's hot but it's really not

I come here because this is where

The poetry is hot

and the people are not

But they still know how to write about it

Holding hands in a dark movie theater

Stealing a kiss or two

having sweating palms

It the first date and you go politely out to eat

Romance fills the air

for them romance is everywhere

First chance at love

Luck at love all else goes right

A good kiss at night

You say a polite good night

exchange numbers and call her when you get home

you had a good time never again shall you feel alone

Should this be a summer romance

One that grows and blossoms like 

Flowers in the summer breeze

As you walk hand in hand together

It begins with a glance in the eyes

Then a smile on the face

Then that look you just can't forget

It's Love for the summer and beyond 

Reviews

[Valentine]

A very sweet and tender write. One of your best. Valentine

[Jamestown]

I enjoyed this piece, sweet sentiment and well written!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[nazia]

Its like the first love. you meet, go out, gaze in each other's eye, spend lovely moments whispering sweetly... A fluid write :)

[Confuser]

Smitty: Just simply lovely...the poetry metaphor is good..it actually brought up vivid images to me of being young and going to the movies....thinking of being young and our course summer love...
Romance fills the air
for them romance is everywhere
First chance at love
Luck at love all else goes right
It seems you evoke images of drive-in movie theatres, being gentlemanly romanced....lovely...thank you: Dale