Its in this bird I sing Its spring

God created him perfectly

Bird in a cage

Lonely in a rage

Must be somebody's pet

I just don't quit know yet

He is a bird of many colors

Feathers all over its body

God created such beauty

In just one little bird

Just think what he did for the rest 

of the human race

He created us in memories of his Face

Every speck every color Just like our creator

For our God sees only the Heart

God sees no color

He loves us all

Sister's and Brother's

Reviews

[Valentine]

Very nice write. Love the picture of the bird too. Valentine

[SAIF ALI]

Really we human are so blessed as God created us in his own image.
Brilliant one sir.

[Ankur Jain]

Jim, you had two nice ideas but instead of focusing on any one, you tried to combine them. and i must say...it wasn't a good decision. had you focused on any one of them you could have written something of this sort...
"Bird in a cage
Only with his rage
Hates that he is someone's pet
Don't even know his owner yet

Proud he is of his colors
Not realizing they'll only get duller
More beauty than feather he possess
it was his soul which was god bless"

or the other way around.....the point is sometime it's best to keep the poem short rather than unsynchronised.
i'm sorry if i've hurt your feelings. i was just giving you a honest criticism. have a nice day :)

[wordman]

a great lesson smitty and a great write