Poem Sweet poetry

Love Poem

Poem Sweet Poetry

Love the way you read and understand

My Pretty Sweet Poem

My Sweet Poetry

You gave an ear and quietly Listen

To the spaces of love

Written within these words of love

Aimed straight at your heart

Able to mend what I have broken apart

Poem Sweet Poetry

The words of my heart soul and mind

Written to mend a heart as good as yours

I believe this poetry of love

Will mend a broken heart

and will secure your heart my way

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

nicely penned. My hub doesn't read my poetry - that may be a good thing though because I rarely write about love.

[Ellen Kolman]

Very sweet poem...I love its simplicity and its pretty message...BRAVO

[Valentine]

Looks like a heart with a big hole in it. Valentine

[SmittyJas]

Its a berry on a tree shriveled up after a long winter hanging in there.

[Cryingkate]

You gave an ear and quietly Listen

To the spaces of love

Written within these words of love

Aimed straight at your heart

Able to mend what I have broken apart

JIM. I hear you loud and clear ;-)

[Cryingkate]

Jim,
This is an amazing piece.
there is more to this then the mind can comprehend.

Here"s some facts.. See what your heart thinks about them :-)

Yesterday... The name Jim keep going through my mind.
I thought of my favorite cousin Jim . also my friend Jim and my step father Jim

I was unaware that yesterday you (Jim) had read some of my poetry and left some awesome heartprints in my comments.

This morning , just moments before discovering your reviews. I was unpacking some more items in my room and as I was unpacking keepsakes from loved ones, The thought about these loved ones in my life was revealing to me, Just how much their love gives security to endure the tough parts of life.

Then I realized that that it what i need to focus on right now. I am making some great changes in life and I need to be courageous. I realize that the courage comes from being loved. Love is security.
I realized in that moment. The importance of Love being that security that helps us be courageous.
So... I decided to focus on all the Love that I have received in life.

It was then I went to post an article I found online for a friend here on W/C and found your review.

Your reviews, gripped my heart and had me captured so that I must respond now and not later when I have more time.
The jest of what I wanted to tell you was that I deeply felt that spiritual connection between one writers heart to another. The things you spoke of I knew was an actual reflection of yourself.
I felt loved that you saw the loves depthness of which I was feeling when i wrote them but I was even more inspired by the depthness of your soul. For one cannot see such things unless they know and are such things.
You are my reflection.
Then..... to top it all off.... I read this poem that you wrote. yesterday.... Or at least posted it yesterday, when all this started lol and wouldn't you know it.....You used the word "secure".................
.(and will secure your heart my way.}
Jim, I can't recall the word "secure" being used in a love poem.... But it is in synche with our hearts talk :-)

Wow... Don't we all need more security these days? We had better send out lots of Love to the world ASAP..

I will have to return Jim and catch up on some reading and review thank yous. I have to stay focused on some life stuff I'm doing, but had to stop and thank you and know my heart heard yours and send some back along with reflections :-) Have a Wonderful Day ! Thank You for my Wonderful and secure day :-)