Thunder in the Rain

A little Woman on the evil side of a rain storm

Thunder in the Rain

By Jim Smith

All this time the sun did shine

But I knew some how there 

Was thunder in the rain

Gray clouds over head sky so gloomy 

Like were in the Grave yard tomb

A chill in the air I felt naked everywhere

Such a thunder in the rain

Have I lost my Brains

She had dumped me 

once and I took her back

and now she has done it again

Dumped me twice I am a fool

She plays nasty games with dirty tools

I'm on the run 

I find this Gal no fun

She's Like thunder in the Rain

Shocking to explore any further

I can't take any more

Looking for her thunder bolt

To Knock me to the floor

 

Of these games she like to play

I got to get away 

I got to get away free

She is nothing but 

Thunder in the rain too me

Song Love a rainy night

By Eddie Rabbit

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Well I do detect a
bit of a rhyme in this piece.

And I think you meant
And these games she likes to play.
If I'm correct. 😇

I do apologize for not looking
at your work thank you
for your kind reviews.

My back has been hurt
so I'm healing
and I have a birthday
coming up this Easter Sunday.

I'll be 37.

But I enjoyed this read.

I've written a bunch
of new Christian poems
I may post them some time.

God bless Benita.