Darling I'm in love with you

Darling I'm in love with you

A Poem by SmittyJas
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Love poem

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Darling I'm in love with you

Everyday you know it's true

I see the sun light hit you face

and the tenderness of your smile

Holds my heart in your hands

Selling me to sweet romance

In your guided eyes

© 2016 SmittyJas


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You write so wonderfully. I really enjoy reading your words. Hopefully you can fund time to check out mine as well. Looking forward to seeing more of yours.:-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Enjoyed this... Short, sweet, and to the point... Also it is pretty... 2 small points... I see the sun light hit you face. (was 'you' intentional or should that be 'your' ? In your guided eyes... (possibly 'gilded' ) ?
Thank you for sharing...
Wolf ,'', ^@@^ ,'',

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ahhhh. Mrs Smitty is one loved Lady


Posted 9 Years Ago


I see the sunlight in your face...sigh....lovely

Posted 9 Years Ago


sweet love poem smitty,enjoyed

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on May 22, 2016
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SmittyJas
SmittyJas

Pittsburgh, PA



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Hi My name is Jim been writing poetry for nine years started on AOL with a few new friends on a tuesday night poetry night. We would meet and post poetry and learn from each other and I learned a lot .. more..