JULY RAIN :)

Something i wrote just now looking out of the window :)

The rain that falls on your face.

Your every movement filled with grace.

You dance for hours with a smile on your face.

Me trying to move at your so paused pace.

You bending in the wind like a flower.

Underneath this July shower.

Your face so vibrant you look so flushed.

I try to talk but i keep being hushed.

That one finger on my lips to appricate the moment.

All these years that we have spent.

This seem slower and entwined.

Like us together to save mankind.

No reason to stop no reason to go.

But the looks on our faces we just know.

So hard not to touch you so hard not to speak.

Your easily draining me as i become so weak.

Lost in the moment so easily taken in.

Now not knowing where to end or where to begin

But lost in your gentle lips were rain drops will fall.

Where my mind will be begging wanting you to call.

Hand in hand we walk by the park.

Where we are heading home as the latness falls to dark.

Author's Note

sorry for mistakes spell checker dosn't work :(

Reviews

[Kelley]

I loved the ending to this Gem and I thought it
was quite romantic in a spring like way. The rhyme
was perfect too. Thanks for the smile.


Kelley

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful soft piece, like a summer rain! The love and devotion are so purely communicated! Excellent!!!!!!!!!

[Rainbowco]

It falls like a gentle shower on my ears. Lovely.