The Shiny Metal Object!

Feelings inside!

That Shiny metal object so sharp so devine.

Knowing it cuts so deep in a line.

Shines like the moon cold like the wind.

Feeling the blood represts me having sinned.

 

One slit here another there.

Somedays honestly i don't even care.

Marks on my arms legs and my shoulder.

Suppose they'll remind me when am older.

 

At the moment am hanging no reason to live.

Wanting so much wanting to give.

Only thing valuable my Fiancee my friend.

He follow me to the edge to the finish the end!

 

Tears flow the blood seeps out!

Feeling the pain without a doubt.

Excuses and lies to cover my back.

Keeping my problem under the hat.

 

My problem never solved keeps popping up.

Get depressed most often hey thats my luck.

Losing control sleeps the only cure.

Why am i here what am i for?

Author's Note

Sorry for any mistakes =)

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

So deeply moving, like the cuts we make in our skin or souls. Your words hang like dark clouds, gripping my heart with the pain. Incredible piece!

Craig