A Needles point at view!

Something i wrote when i was worried well i am still worried lol.

 

 

 

Pointy on the edges pointy on the sides.

All it ever hears is a person's cries.

Long sharp metal sterile strong.

Spikey dagger like prong.

Two sides to a needles face.

To ease the pain seeming soft as lace.

But to my surprise it's deep meaning to stick in you.

A awfulness of gunky ooouze.

Small scratch they say stretching it that extra inch.

Feeling that the extra long irregular pinch.

To me this is pain looking you in the arm.

But seeming so innocent selfless and calm.

But how do you see the Needle the long thing.

Does it make you quiver or make you grin? 

 

 

Author's Note

PLease be kind =)

Reviews

[Raging Flames]

It's a good poem but please don't use the black background, it's distracting. The Chiller font looks okay here, though you could have used plain non-formatted text!

Great job!

[Wildecat]

I think you did a fine job writing this poem. A pleasure to read your poetry.