Difference Of Opinion She May Say, I Know The Truth

How am I to confide? When you lied. I tell you I almost died. When you talk I walk, I'm altogether casual, can you not tell a differnece? A difference in me, A difference in us? It's not my opinion im your dominion. Everything you told me was fake, Leaving me crawling in it's wake. You gave me an emotioanl trake, unable to speak, Making me seem weak...  Leaving me in a heep, there you go, l over the floor, and out the front door. Gone, Now I'm so alone.

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Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Love the rhyming in this, you thought of such great words to use... that ending seems like such loneliness.

[Stormy Weather]

Lies are like poison. A person can make them and be perfectly fine, but once they feed them to you, you slowly die...too grim?

[ErinLovesYou<3]

I think I know what you mean, nothing's ever the same after someone lies. It's like being caught in a spider web, choking you until your dead. Exactly what I said.

[..]

very nicely done, enjoyable read, and wonderful rhyme scheme.