Young Life- Unfinished

Young Life- Unfinished

A Poem by Time.

I am so young, My life has barely begun. I  still have time to stop and smell the roses, try all the different poses. I have time I'm still  in my prime time  to develop my style, it may take a while, every day will be a trial. On level ground I may have found a passion or maybe the newest fashion...

 

To be continued:

© 2011 Time.


Author's Note

Time.
Don't worry about grammar=

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Very well at rhyming, if there is more; i'd like for it to be finished. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago
really good, liked it too. must get it updated.

Posted 14 Years Ago
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I like this so far, very nicely written. Wonderful rhyme scheme.

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 Added on May 29, 2011
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England, B L A N K :), United Kingdom



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I love reading, I write Poems whether you think there good or not there from my heart and soul, each have a purpose to me.. I write things down that happen in my life, it may not be that day or the n.. more..