Ice

A Poem by Time.

My heart is cold, something inwhich you cant't hold. all alone I sit on a marble throne, Stairing at whats before my eyes, Nothing but a bunch of lies. Impairing my judgements of prepairing a life for myself.

© 2011 Time.

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ErinLovesYou<3

Concise but it seems like your trying to convey that your hearts cold and harden from peoples lies... and that when others lie it just impairs your judgement of your own life and how to go about things. I think your trying to show how you've been affected and how it makes you as a a person. Correct me if I'm wrong. c:

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Victoria PoetryBunny

Not much I can say, you seem to have said it, especially in this line, which I like this part a lot:
"Nothing but a bunch of lies. Impairing my judgements of prepairing a life for myself."
Nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago

ErinLovesYou<3

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on May 30, 2011
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Time.

England, B L A N K :), United Kingdom

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I love reading, I write Poems whether you think there good or not there from my heart and soul, each have a purpose to me.. I write things down that happen in my life, it may not be that day or the n.. more..