Letting It Go

I hate you, I really really do,

 

I'm sorry was that to direct?

 

What all did you expect?

 

Arms wide like the rushing tide,

 

This hate is killing me inside,

 

I wish I wish you had died,

 

All this time knowing you lied,

 

you are the tool I was the fool,

 

I'm warry time to burry let us not tarry

 

I'm done. I've had enough, I'm not so tough.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

We all think we are stupid or foolish in the end for befriending someone who we thought was different than they turn out to be. It's happened to me many times, so I can relate. And it's not easy to end certain friendships, but all you know is that once you end that frienship that you weaken yourself in order to make it happen.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

real emotion... quite enjoyed how different this is:
"I hate you, I really really do,

I'm sorry was that to direct?"
And how you wrote this, is a great sense to me, the "rushing tide"
with "arms wide" really well written.
When we are hurt how are we to be so open again from that one who hurt us.
All this time knowing you lied,"
And in this line loved the many rhyming words:
"I'm warry time to burry let us not tarry"
your great at your rhyming, with speaking truth and getting points across at the same time, something that's in life.
The last line is a great way to end this great write. loved it. :)

[Stormy Weather]

I like it. I can really feel the emotion behind it.

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

Humans are so gullable arent we, trusting people that shouldnt be trusted, letting people in and regretting it later and being torn to pieces by the people who were suppose to prevent that from happening in the first place. Wonderful piece.

[Helpless]

i know how you feel, we are all very soft and vulnerable on the inside, too many heartbreaks can often bring out our weaknesses.

[Jean Alexandria Randall]

Strong emotions in this poem. This was very well written.

[watch_the_world]

I really like this! :) great write keep it up!

[TJ]

Loved the format of this with all te internal rhymes toward the end. I love a gritty piece and anything that starts with "I hate you" is good in my book
Good wok

[ErinLovesYou<3]

Good poem James, btw I had already the two poems you requested & I also had reviewed Lifes Race. Ahh your a goofball.
Their both well written though!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This poem has a lot of bite and meaning. The type I enjoy loads.

Well done again:)

[Sarahh]

I think we all go through this phase in life where we hate the stupid and the foolish in the world we live.