Blame Me.

My tears are dried, can we act like I never lied?

To be normal, if only we could act formal,

How am I to match, when were going through

this patch, When I light the flame, I feel lame,

Night, makes us fight. Your always right.

I don't have  a reason to complain,

I have always been vain, you can

knock me around, for what gain?

The summers rain, never looked

so dark, I feel like I've left a mark,

Looking through the Arc.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar/Spelling Errors.

Reviews

[Ashli The Amazing]

loved the structure [: very nice rhyming too ^_^

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

first line is really great:
"My tears are dried, can we act like I never lied?"
i also loved how you wrote this:
" you can
knock me around, for what gain?"
this is really good and tells the truth as well,
great write.

[Stormy Weather]

I love your pattern in this! Your writing always seems to have a really nice rhyme scheme to it.

[Linda]

Not the best :D

[Lily Mae]

Seeing through the rain... I love it. I think you penned your feelings well..xx

[Aleyah]

I think the ending when you say "the summers rain never looked so dark" is a really great line, and adds a lot to your poem. I like the raw emotions and the bluntness. Great poem :D

[Sarahh]

Amazing! You have a great sense of rhyming it really made me think that you blame yourself for whatever happened here.

[ErinLovesYou<3]

I really like this oneeeeeeeeeeeeee, its great!

[Kayla K]

Took me to a whole different place. I loved the first line, it's really hits home right now with some things going on in my life.