The Truth Will Come

I'm lost, the ground is glossed with an icy frost, who am I? the guy that told the lie, but why? But no matter how hard I try, I still ask why? I wish I could cry, No I wish I could die, Nomatter how hard I try, I still ask  why? I lied, in which I tried to hide, but you cried, you know I lied.

Author's Note

Don't worry about grammar/spelling - enjoy

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice use of bold letters and underlining. There is feeling in this... nicely done.

[Samantha Heaton]

I love the rythem to this poem... when you actrully take time to read what you wrote you see strong meaning..... Great write James

[Poetic Beauty]

Lying is never a good choice. It always hurts people in the end.

[Helpless]

so powerful!

[Kayla K]

Wow, the flow of this in my head was like a nursery rhyme, but then you add the meaning and there's a twist. It's great.

[CharlesMonroe]

I love this, I can relate to it as well. It's beautiful and stiched perfectlly. Amazing job James (:

[TJ]

Loved the format and all the internal rhymes in this one. Packed full of despair and hopelessness as well
Good work

[Linda]

Likey

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

This poem captures wonderfully the sense of what lies can do!

For me atleast it does. Great write

[Lily Mae]

Lies are so powerful and yet weak against truth and time.. Great write James..x