The Other Side Of The Glass, It's Sharp to.

I want her to know she is seen,
I want her to be my queen,
Even though I am but a teen,

She is as steady as a stream,
Always always in my dream,
We both have a common theme,

I must advise a gaze into,
her eyes, Without tears,
do not cry, for she will never lie,
she would radther die, then lie.

I see her pain, what can I gain?
My heart might as well been slain,
Could anyone ever be so vain?

Do you hear me? I see you, only you,
I call for you untill my face is blue,
I love you, I see you to.

For Bethany Dawn Burns...

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar, and or spelling mistakes. Most importantly enjoy it. :)

Reviews

[nothingnothingforgetfor..]

I hope with time my good sir, you can sweep her off her feet. Brilliant piece. =)

[OT]

very sweet write, nice job

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

aww...
First stanza i like a lot.
Also in the second stanza, really enjoyed these lines:
"She is as steady as a stream,
Always always in my dream,"
Also i loved the ending, so sweet.
And nice that it's written for someone, sweet of you.
:)

[sarah]

This is amazing! Wow I love love love this amazing work!

[Stormy Weather]

Awwwwwwwwww

[Poetic Beauty]

This was done with love echoing.

[Helpless]

beautiful rhyme and style as well as emotion!

[ErinLovesYou<3]

Awww how cute James :)

[Nicky Wilson]

Really like it :)

[TJ]

Beautiful piece James.