Hate' A strong word; Use it well.

A taste of pain, From me you will never gain the SATISFACTION THE GRATIFICATION, of knowing that you hurt me... A life I live deserves more credit then what you give... Must you hate? I cant relate, A feeling I imitate, but why? why do I try? This coldness, Is Ice, Ice to me, Cold  wrapping me in its mold, I must fold... Leave my story forever Untold.

Author's Note

This poem is for a deeper then what It may seem.. enjoy and ignore grammar and spelling mistakes.. please enjoy :)

Reviews

[HeIsWe]

wow :) this is really good

[Suzy Q]

I don't know how to hate. I don't understand why some people find it so human to feel that. I really liked it, so keep on writing, and I'll just keep on reading I guess.

[Kat Collins]

You write well...work on the punctation, grammer, and spelling...it's important in order to have great works! You have an older soul...keep writing and getting it out there!

[Nicky Wilson]

Loved it and I can indeed truly relate !! great write keep penning !! :)

[TJ]

Wonderful and emotional piece!
Putting yourself out there and telling this person you wot stand for mistreatment anymore!
Love it!

[Stormy Weather]

I really love how much voice you have in all your poems. You really have your own style of writing, and I like it. :)

[stars are far]

nice ..

[Babieegirl]

I agree to your title. hahaha. Nice write. I liked the rhyme scheme a lot (:

[Ashli The Amazing]

it was very nice, very deep i absolutely loved it [: great rhyming job well done! ^_^

[gothicchica]

i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooovved ittttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!