Inner Workings Of The Soul

I give more then I receive,
Is it so hard for you to believe?
What do you expect to achieve?

I am me,
Where do I find "we"
I'm prying myself free.

Where do I begin,
It's so hard to look within,
I feel like a stranger in my own skin.

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar and spelling please.

Reviews

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Great poem. Really great job!!

[shunik]

the words circled my whole being....

[ErinLovesYou<3]

Mm, I can relate dear.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Another great write from you, I love that last line, love the title, and I love the meaning of this. Really great, I like this a lot.

[Seanne Tholltree]

I give more then I receive,
Is it so hard for you to believe?
What do you expect to achieve?

I am me,
Where do I find "we"
I'm prying myself free.

Where do I begin,
It's so hard to look within,
I feel like a stranger in my own skin.

i like how the poem goes...

[Lily Mae]

There are many times in life where we feel like strangers in our own skin..xx nice write..xx

[Poetic Beauty]

We all feel alone and like we don't fit in from time to time. Trust me even the popular people do they just don't show it. These are the true feelings of being human not pleasant but true.