Something About Hate

Anger inside

Hate fills my body

Love - it hates me

They all hate love

I'd give it all to thee

Danger aside

My face, my body

Daze, to reappear

It all comes back

Not what I used to see

Reviews

[William Gardner]

Ok. Can you say all of this without using the words hate or love?

[Akira Kodama]

No. It wouldn't be the same poem. There is repetition for a reason.

[William Gardner]

I hear you and I agree. Thing is that 90% of all poems are about hate and love (the other 10% are war poems)- So what i'm urging here is to dig deeper and think what is the anger inside? how does it manifest? Where and how does it end- etc.

[Akira Kodama]

Alright. Thank you.