LOVE IN THE AIR

Sometimes loving can be so silent that it's vibe talks the loudest. In a mood to emphasize on love this monsoon!

I saw you, you saw me
Waves became harder in the middle sea
Why still the hesitation
Though, corners are jumping high
Besides the excuse of meditation.

I love you, you love me
Words are still shaking
they may have fallen somewhere
For watching you everywhere.

This aura has changed the
thoughts, and buried the words to be spoken
Let both of us fantasize with strong believe which reveals,
'Love is in the air'

Reviews

[Riddhi]

I read this poem because I was eager to know how can one express that famous title..But I must say you penned it really well ...I really liked the way you wrote it..This poem can actually be sung as a beautiful song because of the beautiful rhythm that it has..
Keep writing..

[Sneh]

Thank you Riddhi for an amazing review! 🤗🤗

[raj24]

Love is certainly in the air, especially in this season. Silence of love is always more meaningful to me, I always believe its our feelings that should let the other believe what's in my heart.
" अंदाज़े बयां आँखों से हो तो बात ही क्या है ,
इश्क़ जुबां पे आया होटों पे नहीं तो इश्क़ ही क्या है. "
Another lovely work by you and I am loving this feeling of being in love with your words.
Raj

[Sneh]

Wonderful words by you, Mr. Raj
I appreciate.
Waah shayar Sahab!! -commendable ..read moreWonderful words by you, Mr. Raj
I appreciate.
Waah shayar Sahab!! -commendable ..
Thanks for the read and an amazing review..
Sneh

[Najam Us Saher]

You captured the breeze perfectly in your words. I can feel the love 😀

[Sneh]

Glad you liked it:))
Grateful! ☺

[moog-drika]

I loved the way you portrayed the most common phrase so interestingly that it actually sprinkles a pleasant vibe with a very nice touch of rhythm. Well done!

[Sneh]

Thanks heartedly for the positive feedback dear.
-sneh