A ROSE IN HER CLOSET

Some Glimpses of her birthday.

She desired to celebrate rich way,
as it was her 18th Natal day
Dazzled eyes, shimmered dress
Upon it, the best was 'grace'.

All wait was over, as he came closer
Holding each other's hand headed to the venue,
Clapping hands, wishing lips were of no new.

On a sudden, he lifted the rose and revealed to her.
She, giving broad smile on gleeful face,
Thanked her 'Brother' for wonderful remembrance!

Now, she is twenty eight,
managed somehow to keep the Rose in her closet!

Reviews

[moog-drika]

This portrays the situation of most of the people. The more number we add to our age, the more people get subtracted from our life. And the term birthday that used to be the most stirring moment for us, starts to be the most dreary moment. And the only thing we are left with is the rose that symbolizes nothing but those memory that we get from the day. Greatly penned with a very smooth rhythm. Loved it.

[Sneh]

Appreciate the philosophy and wholly agreed to it. Many wishes for your upcoming birthday!!
Sneh

[moog-drika]

aww thanks, it's two months left. :3

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I loved the words and the meaning. Poetry allows us to give things our own meanings too and the one that spoke to me was innocence being "revealed" and being kept in a sacred and secured place to be visited within a "closet". Very deep and many things to be extracted. Thanks for sharing!

[Sneh]

I entirely favour your words, these things induce us to move further and on. Thanks heartily for giving it a read!! 🤗
Sneh

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Always! Thanks for sharing! 😉

[Najam Us Saher]

This poem is very passionate. I loved it.

[Sneh]

Thanks for the read and being kind dear!

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome.

[wordman]

and the roses in the closet turns to memories

[Sneh]

That's very true. Thanks for the read!
Sneh

[wordman]

you`re welcome

[Chris Shaw]

Birthdays can be wonderful celebrations when you are young, filled with happy memories. By the time you are my age, (if not a lot before) you start to dread the month you were born. Another notch and another wrinkle. Enjoyed your words Sneh.

Chris

[Sneh]

So true I observed my elder one's, they seem to be very less interested.
Thank you for giving it a read!
Sneh