Waging Flame of a Lover's War

Waging Flame of a Lover's War
By: Adam M. Snow

 

My love I told you once before,
of this life and waging war.
But if my life should come to pass,
our memories should forever last.
I say it only once again,
"I shall not fear the foe of men."
But if I cannot grasp our love,
our morning star shall fall above.
I shall not live but live again.
I shall love you till the very end.
But if our end were sure to come,
my heart is yours, as I lay numb.

Reviews

[The Analog Kid]

Great love poem, with substance. We'll have to read more of each other's poems:)

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you, will do

[The Analog Kid]

YW

[Tomás Ó C..]

I like this one, even the half rhyme of the first two lines

[Adam M. Snow]

I'm glad you enjoyed it

[Sami Khalil]

You have the spirit of Shakespeare , I guess

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you... perhaps you might wanna check out 'Ladylove' as well

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure . I will

[Adam M. Snow]

Why thank you

[Sami Khalil]

I like writers who support others and encourage others but with honesty for it is not just about us it is about the family( Of poets , writers, story tellers...)

[Adam M. Snow]

I totally agree with you

[Sami Khalil]

Smiling...

[Renée]

Beautiful as Always Adam ! ok you win...tears... lol

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

"I shall not fear the foe of men." Indeed, we all do, but defy, defy and defy again my darling, well done, good read.

[MoriartyMesa]

enjoyed the flow and honesty of the work.

[MOON]

Lovely flowing write.

[Elaenor Aisling]

This piece flows very well. Good work.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts in the poem. The words are real statements of love.
"I shall not live but live again.
I shall love you till the very end."
A strong ending to a outstanding poem of love.
Coyote

[Jazmen]

This is rad. I like how you had the deep sadness set into an essential (simplified?), more old-time great poem.
Nice work