Bleeding Ink

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bleeding Ink
By: Adam M. Snow

 

I lay naked, bleeding ink
with pages of forbidden text;
but though I'm ill yet cannot blink,
you mockery tongue had perplexed.

 

I clinched my fist;
the remains of my heart cries out,
"I may no longer exist!"
with my raging voice I shout.

 

Your blasphemy you had spoke,
shattered my bearing soul;
and by your voice my heart broke,
and it is my heart that which you stole.

 

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Reviews

[marie]

Beautiful all I can say beautiful

[Renée]

makes my heart ache just to read Adam ! Brilliant !

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice picture. Nice title. Nice beginning lines:
"I lay naked, bleeding ink
with pages of forbidden text;"
Love the ending two lines as well.

[MOON]

Poignant lovely write as usual

[Crazy Cat Man]

awesome

[Amila Jay]

and by your voice my heart broke,
and it is my heart that which you stole.

Wow ...

[Heather]

Adam I enjoyed this, its deep emotions, tragic write. ..lovely and you are talented!

[afra]

sad but great

[Jetta Zippora]

Wow. Amazing writing as usual, Adam. This is tragic but very, very lovely.