I am Love's Profound Lost Love

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I am Love's Profound Lost Love
By: Adam M. Snow

 

I am love's profound lost love,
I fade each night away.
I have gained nothing yet lost all,
grasping the perpetual sway.

 

But woe as sorrow did covers me,
I kneeled before thee humbled and lost.
I gave unto thee a blood soaked quill,
and a text of a tragic play.

Reviews

[Renée]

Sorrow filled beauty

[Mockingbird]

very melancholy, excellent in its brevity.

[♥ Kinnixk]

Very nice! Very intriguing! :)

[The Fatal Lover]

O.o My review won't show right. But I loved the poem very much, the shortness is perfect with the words and the title is very haunting. Perfect!

[sharonlee]

Interesting line of thought, loves own profound love to be lost... haunting.

[Baby Ricochet]

Awesome! Great write! Cheers.

[kublakhan27]

I read this a few times and several ideas came to mind in the process...a thoughtful and lyrical piece...well done.