My Fair Swan

My Fair Swan

By: Adam M. Snow

My fair swan, why dost thou not know thy heart?
Yet be it so that it may be, grace upon thy wings.
Grace the shade of purity white,
O' white the shade of thy heavens with gold fleece.

Yet ye fair swan, you not know this poor lout soul longth for thee?
To long for a kiss, to turn thee free; a princess thou is.
O' my fair swan, dost one spread one's wings to soar?
Then as I unto thee, and thee unto I shall we too soar.

But my fair love these chains allude me,
Bounding my fate without thee forevermore.
Clipping my wings and grounding me forevermore.

My love, thou art the purity of swans;
Yet I, your lout a crow with broken wings.
In this endeavour which I follow thee,
To ends of earth forevermore.
And dost thou and I calmly wait forevermore.  

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Reviews

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*looks at picture* OH MY GAWD THE PRINCE AND THE RAVEN!!!!! :D ....No just me?...okay..then...still though so beautiful! :D It was truly a great and luxurious peice to read between and two different birds that represent to society two different things. LOVELY JOB!!! :D

[Adam M. Snow]

I forgot about the Prince and the Raven lol but Thank you

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:D YOU DO REMEMEBER!!!! NEEHEEEHEEE!! :D and welcome :D

[Adam M. Snow]

Indeed I do lol

[Renée]

Always beautiful work Adam ( :

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Renée]

a pleasure Adam ! Nice to see ya on ( :

[The Fatal Lover]

So beautiful! I love it very much and enjoyed the picture as well. Great job! I love your work very much and just enjoy reading anything you write. You have a great talent and I enjoy everything you do. ^^

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you kindly

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful story in the poem. I like the conversation and the ending. Love can always create a place for love to grow. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[WingsToFly]

Beautiful, an enjoyable read!

[kublakhan27]

Shades of Robert Burns...the repetition works great too...well done.

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Baby Ricochet]

Romanticism. Classy.

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Marie]

Lovely Elizabethen English tells this tale so gently...

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you

[Jetta Zippora]

So lovely. What a perfectly gentle, lyrical, and magical write, my friend. I love it. :)

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you