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I Wonder
By: Adam M. Snow

 

I wonder,
I wonder if this life is life at all;
If it's a dream, then I may fall.
The feelings I embrace may be false;
The triumph of love, this moonlight waltz.
Memories I hold dear,
Thoughts of fear:
Are they all that which they seem,
A fragments of a shattered dream?
But whom to say this dream is real,
Even though we may not feel.
It harms me to say,
I don't wish it this way.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

The poem certainly delivers on the promise of the title. Excellent work!

[Adam M. Snow]

Thank you so much

[BlackRose]

Wow! Fantastic. You have captured this well, what ever your inspiration is or was for this. Like your works so far. Becoming one of my favorites. :o)

[Nr. Nine]

outstandiung poem! I sure can realte to this one.

Nr. Nine

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Beautiful!

[Coyote Poetry]

"The triumph of love, this moonlight waltz.
Memories I hold dear,
Thoughts of fear: "
I like those movies with flashbacks. I wonder sometime how important is one person in this large world? I like the thoughts and wonder create by your poem. Life is a permanent struggle to find reason and purpose to be alive. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful poem

[Carolann Dowsett]

I love this and its a thought we often have I think. The reality of life seems so unreal at times.

[marie]

i think i am in love with this piece, you have captured one of my most common thoughts

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Mr.Snow, I miss the better part of your higher poetry. This is a start, but are you out of the habit?

[Adam M. Snow]

I guess I have been losing inspirations lately....being stuck in a house 24/7, without a means of a car to travel in search for inspirations....I find myself struggling to write anymore.... I find myself dreaming of empty thoughts....I once could write dozens a day, but now am stripped to couple a week..... For what little inspirations I could find around here, I try and make due with that....But I long for that day when I could blossom back into that poet that I once was......I hope that day is soon

[Michael Kevin Spencer]

Yes I remember him and for sure I'll wait till you write more, since I believe in you and your work. Thanks for the explanation Mr. Snow.