My Love

My Love
Written by Adam M. Snow

Time passes as night blooms,
again, I'm left to ponder.
The stars’ weeps,
but still I wonder,
“What have become of me?”

It is but convalescence I seek,
healing of this broken heart.
But my future's bleak
without a love of my own.

Where is she, my love,
the bearer of my heart;
the one to save me
from this world apart,
my life?

Am I not worthy
for this thing called 'love?'
Why does it elude me
this thing called 'my love?'

If I'm not meant to love
then let me be.
Let me wallow
in my self-pity.

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Reviews

[Katrina Mckeown]

I've felt like this many a time, unworthy and unwanted in love, a feeling of such destitute and sad! I think it would be so nice sometimes to feel part of a team setting and achieving goals together, going travelling or just re -arranging home or decorating etc having a best friend would be so nice to live in harmony with some significant other but I've now been on my own so long..i don't know how I'd cope or trust another to share my proximity with. ..I'm really not looking for love now but a nice friendship would be good, ! Thought provoking well written poem, !

[M. L. F.]

Beautiful.... Really, this is nice.

[Sami Khalil]

It sounded like a sad song of the heart. Love will bloom again in your life...:).................

[andrew mitchell]

A nice write Adam of a shakespearean tone to me which you do very well. I would not want you to wallow in self pity , but bide your time till love returns in real life, but I know why you wrote this for the desired impact for the reader.